make content that people want to watch
i thought that this would be maybe the first 3+ rating that I would give today, but it turned out to be an uninspired sketch of a person singing half a Disney song.
almost no content
it didn't entertain me.
A stick figure hits some targets
So, a stick figure hits some targets for about 10 seconds or so. I see no reason to give this more than a 2/10
I said it was a short combo so the proper thing to do is to critique me on what's in the content, not what is missing but I guess you are obliged to your own opinion.
Really doesn't go anywhere
Also, Your play button looks like it's part of the ad.
I'm actually going to go back and watch the earlier episodes.
I do see some potential issues with storytelling which I might comment on after seeing the other parts.
thanks :) You should have watched the other episodes before watching this one. Otherwise it will be confusing...
I don't think it has issues with storytelling I think you have to watch the other parts first. lol
Some guys fight
We've all seen this one before. You have some guys, and they fight for no reason. That's pretty much it.
I didn't really focus on the "Story" i just focused on animating strong characters fighting . . That was the whole point of the animation . . Using my talent is all . .
I did find the PSTW rpg itself much more entertaining than this.
Now, make it a game
Short and good
Something just tells me that there is a funnier possible way to drive the premise though. I do think that there is more that you can do with it.
Don't tell me this is another flash that looks like a loading screen? or is it actually loading or something?
it's not meant to be like this lol. it didn't upload correctly
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