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Test your game

Your game shows no signs of a game that has actually been playtested.

Your gun shoots on click instead of mouse down like it should

RIght away you get surrounded by enemies, and by the time that you can move out of the starting area, you've already killed half of them.

Once you've killed all the enemies, you're done. and there's nothing left to do but wander around.

There's this coin that keeps following you that you can't pick up

Coins seem to have no use.

There's no reward for the player at the end.

This was not a game that was ready to be submitted

Your game is boring and your message is weak

At first the game remind me of a nes game called NARC, after a while the same old gameplay got a bit boring, then the animal farm quote came up and nothing happens anymore.

As for your political message, You have no political message. Seriously, even after reading your comments can't figure out what you're trying to say. I assumed that this game had a political message of some sort, considering the fact that It appears to be set around the occupy wall street protest. Was there not supposed to be a message?

Worse than breakout

Normally in breakout games, you can control the way the ball bounces based on where it lands on your paddle. in this game you have no such control, and it's annoying to see the ball go all the way back across the screen when you only have a few blocks left.

Also Sometimes I would advance to the next level without actually clearing all(or even most) of the blocks. Is this that "cheat" you mentioned?

robogobodo responds:

I did that on purpose so you wouldn't have to wait to clear them all, and that's not the cheat.

interesting game

This is an interesting, unique, and stable game.

I like how you can move left and right using either the wasd keys or the wasd keys

When you hit a balloon, what appears to be collectible items falls to the ground. It's nearly impossible to collect those items, if they are items.

Decent story, great musci.

I did quite like the story. It wasn't too terribly deep, but nothing on newgrounds really is.

The music is very good, and It really drives the quality more than anything else.

When you make a flash submission to Newgrounds, you can choose whether you want to submit it as a movie or as a game. This is a movie.

There's an issue with the word wrapping. Since you render your words in a typewriter fashion, words toward the end of a row will begin on one line, and when they get too long, they move across the screen and 1 row down. This is distracting and confusing for some, and is a bug that needs fixing.

Nittram responds:

The story isn't so deep now, but it will continue; I hope you keep reading it!

Thank you for finding that glich, I'm working to fix it.

not much to it

the raindrops are completely randomly generated, which really isn't a good thing. you should do something to control how the raindrops are distributed to some extent.

Also, when you click and hold but not move the mouse, you should have a neutral sprite.

Great game

Great Game, The music was nice, the graphics were nice, and the game was fun. I didn't have too much time to play through all the levels, but for the first half dozen or so, I like the way the puzzles were constructed, being straightforward in an non-obvious way.

One thing you should work on though is the power of your shot. right now, It's kinda hard to control how far you will be shot.

I liked the game when I played it

I liked the game when I played it, but I can't anymore. When I click on play, nothing happens. I would otherwise be rating it a 9/10

I'm looking forward to the fix. It would be a shame for a great game like this to fall into obscurity because people can't play it a second time.

As to why I would otherwise rate 9/10 instead of 10/10 is due to (perceived) balance. Right now, it seems to me that laser turrets are the only turrets worth building. Everything else just seems inferior.

moar polish

I bashed the keyboard until I figured out what the controls are supposed to be, and then I found the game mildly amusing for a couple levels, and after that I got stuck in some corner where I couldn't do anything.

You need an instructions screen
You need Sound
You need more design
You need more debugging
You need a HUD
You need a menu screen to wrap your game in

Quick and simple

This is a very nice game if you just want to sit back and not think for a few minutes

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